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Seen both pictures in the Critique folder, all I can see is you're way better than me and :
You can improve on showing texture, on the other picture in the folder, the armor could've had more detail - if you were looking for the picture to focus on one certain thing then I guess that can be excusable-
Nother thing you can improve on is faces \o/
Theres tons of room to refine your style, maybe try to make the face look a bit more fleshy (?) Not realanimu, but show understanding, or indicating that the eyeball would be round. Basically show that you also understand how to draw a human face.
Then theres that anatomy which everyone can improve on.
Nothing else I can say sinceyourwaybetteratthisthanmeahahahahahahahahahakillmepls